Saturday, April 9, 2011

Hummingbird Haiku



A whir in the trees
Then, a flash of red alights
Dancing hummingbird
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10 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 9, 2011 at 8:12 AM

    Lovely Haiku! I love how 'whir' in the first line brings movement and sound to the piece. Bravo!

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  2. Sheila SilerApril 9, 2011 at 8:42 AM

    I love hummingbirds AND haiku!Beautiful job (and photo).

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  3. jkraus8464April 9, 2011 at 4:28 PM

    Imagine my distress to read your lovely hummingbird haiku. I have one prepared to do on my H page, which may not go up till tomorrow. But mine is totally different. Yours was lovely. I love hummingbirds and I love writing haiku.

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  4. UnknownApril 9, 2011 at 5:43 PM

    Wow, beautiful! I love to see hummingbirds around my house.

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  5. Ju DimelloApril 9, 2011 at 7:41 PM

    Beautiful! Short and sweet.

    And cute pic !

    Following you from A-Z Challenge!

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  6. LivinOurDashApril 9, 2011 at 9:28 PM

    Beautiful!

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  7. Ellie GarrattApril 10, 2011 at 5:28 AM

    A beautiful Haiku. So pleased to have found your blog through A to Z.

    Ellie Garratt

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  8. Sarah AllenApril 10, 2011 at 3:54 PM

    Beautiful! Love haiku's, and love the picture :)

    Sarah Allen
    (my creative writing blog)

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  9. N. R. WilliamsApril 10, 2011 at 7:01 PM

    I do love hummingbirds. I painted a picture of one once.
    Nancy
    N. R. Williams, The Treasures of Carmelidrium.

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  10. Cathy Olliffe-WebsterApril 10, 2011 at 7:03 PM

    What a lovely blog you have! Nice haiku and, hey, East of Eden, too? Love it!

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