Today is the WIP It Good Blogfest, hosted by DL Hammons at Cruising Altitude.
The gist of the blogfest is to tell the blogosphere about a current
WIP (work in progress) and, if wanted and desired, to solicit beta readers
and/or critique partners.
I actually have two WIPs right now: A completed draft of a memoir and
seven pages of a trilogy. Given the fact that I haven’t even reached the
inciting incident in Book I of my trilogy, I’ll go with my memoir.
WIP Title: OUR LIFE ON THE ROAD
Genre: Narrative non-fiction
How long have you been working on it? Probably five years. The road
trip happened in 2006-07.
Elevator Pitch: (Seriously, I am no good at these things, and I know I
have to be).
In 2006, we left our lives behind to live on the road and visit all
the national parks in the lower 48. But on day five of the trip, I learned I
was pregnant—something that simply was not supposed to happen, especially with
no maternity coverage. Can a yearlong trip and a marriage survive?
Brief Synopsis:
In 2006 we had a dream: Sell our
house and fund a yearlong trip around the country to visit the national parks.
Traveling with our two-year-old son, Justin, we looked ahead to our clockwise
journey around the U.S. as our old lives faded in the mirror.
Five days into the trip, I found out I was pregnant. With no jobs, no home, and no maternity coverage, I convinced my husband we should continue our road trip anyway. We survived battles with the elements, with animals, and with each other. We agonized over prenatal care and how to find it. We sustained rejection. We hiked. We climbed. We potty-trained Justin. And we endured marital disunity. Yet we still lived the dream.
In December of that year, we stopped in Florida to have the baby. In early labor and already in trouble, the doctors sliced me open in an emergency C-section. Zane, despite being born full-term and exactly on his due date, weighed only 3 pounds, 14 ounces. He wasn’t doing well.
Five days into the trip, I found out I was pregnant. With no jobs, no home, and no maternity coverage, I convinced my husband we should continue our road trip anyway. We survived battles with the elements, with animals, and with each other. We agonized over prenatal care and how to find it. We sustained rejection. We hiked. We climbed. We potty-trained Justin. And we endured marital disunity. Yet we still lived the dream.
In December of that year, we stopped in Florida to have the baby. In early labor and already in trouble, the doctors sliced me open in an emergency C-section. Zane, despite being born full-term and exactly on his due date, weighed only 3 pounds, 14 ounces. He wasn’t doing well.
Fighting for his life and with an array of physical defects, we learned on day five of his life the devastating news that would alter our lives forever. Zane was born with Trisomy 18, the chromosomal condition that kills most babies in the first week. We signed a Do Not Resuscitate order, visited the hospital chaplain, and held Zane as much as we could. We waited for him to die.
The odds were against Zane living for more than a week, but since he didn’t know any better, he just kept on living. After 17 days in intensive care, he no longer needed to be there. We took him back on the road where life and road trip forever changed.
Are you looking for a critique partner? Though I have two critique
partners, I could always use another, I suppose. If it’s the right fit.
Are you looking for a beta reader? Hmmm…maybe. Is that vague enough for
you?
What are you working on right now?

Wow - that sounds like some trip! I can see why you're taking so much time over it and what an incredible legacy for your kids.
ReplyDeleteBest of luck (hope Zane is now well).
Shah X
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What an intense story, just incredible! I hope Zane beat the odds. Thanks for sharing with us today and I wish you the very best with this. (:
ReplyDeleteSusan, I'm very much looking forward to reading this some day. Zane is constantly an inspiration. =)
ReplyDeleteI love this story. It has all the elements for a powerful and inspirational memoir. I can't read it right now, but I'd love to read it in August when my life calms down a bit.
ReplyDeleteWow, what a story!!! And a miracle.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like a really intense memoir! I'd love to read it someday.
ReplyDeleteooh, i would totally read this memoir!
ReplyDeleteI really hope you get to finish it! It sounds such a roller coaster experience x
ReplyDeleteSuzanne @ Suzannes Tribe
I remember hearing about Zane. I'm so glad you're writing this down. I would totally read it!
ReplyDeleteWow, what a crazy adventure. Some people really amaze me with the things they can go through.
ReplyDeleteYour story sounds amazing. It's definitely something I'd read.
ReplyDeleteSounds like an amazing journey. I'd definitely read it.
ReplyDeleteIf I didn't know better, I'd think that was an awesome pitch for a FICTION novel. This will make a dynamite book someday! Thank you for sharing it with us. :)
ReplyDeleteHey, Susan,
ReplyDeleteI'm sure your struggles and triumphs will engage and encourage readers when you get the memoir done.
Looking for a CP too. Have chapter one of Absolution written and not much else. If you're game...
Sounds pretty cool!
ReplyDeleteI'll keep and eye out for this.
Tim
The Other Side
Wow. You are an inspiration -- as is the rest of your family and especially Zane.
ReplyDeleteSusan...I for sure want to critique for you! I love the premise. I would love if my husband and I could do a trip like that.
ReplyDeleteWhat a road trip!! It is such an interesting premise...I cannot wait to hear more - I truly hope you complete it - so I can discover how this memoir ends ;) lovely site btw.
ReplyDeleteI don't read nonfiction, but this sounds good to me!
ReplyDeleteWow. What an amazing story! It sounds like it anyway. I would definitely read this story.
ReplyDeleteWhat a life story, certainly full of amazing things. Good luck with continuing it.
ReplyDeleteSusan, you are amazing! I would love to read this and I can't wait until I can!!!! Very, very inspirational :)
ReplyDeleteI love it too -- your memoir. This is something I've always wanted to do, live in an RV or camper for a year and travel.
ReplyDeleteI have no beta readers or critique partners. I need to get some. :)
What an amazing story! I love road trips - but this is more than just a road trip, wow!
ReplyDeleteI know this will be an amazing book to read. Can't wait until you have it out in the world!
ReplyDeleteSounds like an amazing premise!
ReplyDeleteAll the best!
Nas
Oh my gosh, Susan! That's an incredible story. Glad you're going to tell it - though I imagine reliving parts of it are going to be difficult.
ReplyDeleteWow, your story blew me away. Nicki's right, telling it might be painful at times, but you can give hope to so many. I'll definitely be in line to buy a copy!
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